Thank you Tom, especially for the suggestion made before I add color.
In this case, the two protagonists are going to be exchanging low-intensity information, so I needed as much room as I could squeeze in-between them.
I had started to color this page in last night, but your suggestion reminds me to get those dialogue bubbles in so I can see how things fit. Thanks Tom.
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You can check out the first three chapters at Brien's website.
This is looking good as always!
Brien, don't know what the dialogue is, but everything is looking good to me.
what is the story about?
You're welcome!
Thank you Tom, especially for the suggestion made before I add color.
In this case, the two protagonists are going to be exchanging low-intensity information, so I needed as much room as I could squeeze in-between them.
I had started to color this page in last night, but your suggestion reminds me to get those dialogue bubbles in so I can see how things fit. Thanks Tom.
Nice Brien! I like your horses!
One suggestion--middle bottom panel, if the two characters were leaning forward toward each other it would be more dramatic.
is there dialogue yet to be added to these pages?