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AbalonCh4 P2

My daily post. Its still really rough but I welcome critique anyway. Happy Sunday.

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  • You can check out the first three chapters at Brien's website.

    This is looking good as always!

  • Brien, don't know what the dialogue is, but everything is looking good to me.   

  • what is the story about?

  • You're welcome!

  • Thank you Tom, especially for the suggestion made before I add color.

    In this case, the two protagonists are going to be exchanging low-intensity information, so I needed as much room as I could squeeze in-between them.

       I had started to color this page in last night, but your suggestion reminds me to get those dialogue bubbles in so I can see how things fit. Thanks Tom.

  • Nice Brien! I like your horses!

    One suggestion--middle bottom panel, if the two characters were leaning forward toward each other it would be more dramatic.

    is there dialogue yet to be added to these pages?

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