Hey bro, i just looked on your my space. You have some great pics. Coming from a brother and it is just my opinion( Just trying to help a brother out don't take it personal). Take some time to improve on your anatomy,(of course I'm not perfect!!), Make your inks or if you are going from pencil to scan to computer, More bolder on the outside of each thing. it makes your pages come out a little more on your pages. Make all your lines more bolder. Make your lettering a little bolder with the computer fonts available on-line the postiblities are endless. Great work though!!! One more thing( another opinion.) It's alittle too graphic in killing scenes. You want to be available to all audiences. In those pannels do a all black pannel. I know that you might be a little frustrated at me, thinking what's up this guy!!! But I just wanted to make your comic that much better(Not like it's awsome already!!). Well Come check out my pages on my page and give me some honest opinions. But i just have only have two pages on from my book. but keep checking back to see some updates and my future web page in the making!!! God Bless BAP out!!!
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