Thank you for spending time with the images. That is something good to think about. What is happening here is that in the print version of the comic there is one image with a lot of text. When I put the image into our comic reader script I break it up into bite sized chunks. The viewer animates the change so there is an indication of the passage of time. The dialogue balloons change but the image remains the same. In the daily dose I was thinking of doing the same thing but there is no animation. In hindsight I would have done things differently but writers like words.
I went back and forth between 3.1 and 3.2, and I'm guessing they were meant to be sequential pages rather than the same page on which you were trying out different speech bubbles. If that is the case then small changes should be made in there positions to denote the passage of time. The demon especially, since he is in a off-balanced position which denotes movement, needs to change position.
Spiritman Daily Dose 137 - Can you guess where the story takes place based on the skyline? ...spoiler... it's Des Moines. Scott and I grew up in Iowa and Scott lives in Des Moines so it seemed natural. Plus, it fits with the story of Spiritman. Martin is an average teenager. Nothing amazing. But God does amazing things in his life... where he is.
"Brothers and sisters, think of what you were when you were called. Not many of you were wise by human standards; not many were influential; not many were of noble birth. But God chose the foolish things of the world to shame the wise; God chose the weak things of the world to shame the strong. God chose the lowly things of this world and the despised things—and the things that are not—to nullify the things that are, so that no one may boast before him." 1 Corinthians 1:26-29 NIV
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The comic book reader/viewer is at our website...
http://spiritmancomics.com
it animates the transition from panel to panel. My last comment was not as clear as I would have liked, but there it is...
Thank you for spending time with the images. That is something good to think about. What is happening here is that in the print version of the comic there is one image with a lot of text. When I put the image into our comic reader script I break it up into bite sized chunks. The viewer animates the change so there is an indication of the passage of time. The dialogue balloons change but the image remains the same. In the daily dose I was thinking of doing the same thing but there is no animation. In hindsight I would have done things differently but writers like words.
I went back and forth between 3.1 and 3.2, and I'm guessing they were meant to be sequential pages rather than the same page on which you were trying out different speech bubbles. If that is the case then small changes should be made in there positions to denote the passage of time. The demon especially, since he is in a off-balanced position which denotes movement, needs to change position.
Spiritman Daily Dose 137 - Can you guess where the story takes place based on the skyline? ...spoiler... it's Des Moines. Scott and I grew up in Iowa and Scott lives in Des Moines so it seemed natural. Plus, it fits with the story of Spiritman. Martin is an average teenager. Nothing amazing. But God does amazing things in his life... where he is.
"Brothers and sisters, think of what you were when you were called. Not many of you were wise by human standards; not many were influential; not many were of noble birth. But God chose the foolish things of the world to shame the wise; God chose the weak things of the world to shame the strong. God chose the lowly things of this world and the despised things—and the things that are not—to nullify the things that are, so that no one may boast before him." 1 Corinthians 1:26-29 NIV