Rita's word balloons run over and interfere with the thought flow in the other panels. Try moving several of her word balloons and Martin's "Exactly." to the area over their heads. "You fly first" or "we'll watch you..." could possibly be condensed or even eliminated, because you want to focus on the conflict between Rita's aggression and Chelsea's desperation in the last frame.
Spiritman Daily Dose 235 - The dialogue balloons sort of float through all 3 of these panels tying them together. Rita, the angry lady, is challenging Martin to be the first to escape from the skyscraper prison.
"It was necessary that the message of God should be told to you first; but, since you reject it and reckon yourselves not worthy of the eternal life – we turn to the Gentiles!" Acts 13:46 OEB
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Good thoughts, as always.
Excellent work as always! Good storyline.
Rita's word balloons run over and interfere with the thought flow in the other panels. Try moving several of her word balloons and Martin's "Exactly." to the area over their heads. "You fly first" or "we'll watch you..." could possibly be condensed or even eliminated, because you want to focus on the conflict between Rita's aggression and Chelsea's desperation in the last frame.