I'm going on with the project, please send me feedback about the storytelling, it's important for me to know your opinion,
Silent Wars issue one
Story, lettering and Screentones by me
Lineart by Philip Oak
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Thank you for the feedback, I'll try to post a 9 pages short story so that u can give me your opinion. Thank you!
I will pray for your project. I assume you want feedback on the storytelling quite a few pages down the line. The page design, pencils and inks are awesome so far.