your pages are fantastic, the art is simple and fun. I do think that the lettering needs to pop more because the artwork is really fun looking and the lettering needs to shine also. A good example is like lettering in Spawn, atleast the original series and how the letterer did it when McFarlene was drawing it. Like I think the word hello would be slanted and more definition in the word, like maybe the word would be big and colorful. Your character is really creative and colorful, and his words I think should be also.
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