oh, wow. no i never even looked at it that way--- i totally see what you are saying. the first part where he is sitting in the chair, that's a different room... when you see her back, right next to that, she is standing in the back of the cottage in a room somewhere. those images don't take place in the same room, it's two different places... but yeah, the way it runs together, it LOOKS like she is standing in front of him, but really he is turning his head to hear what she is saying, because she is behind him. i never looked at it that way before... i can see how it could be misconstrued. in the blocks that follow he gets up and walks to the back of the house, and sees her back... that's all he ever sees, and even that, was a struggle for him.
it was a little questionable even when he was just looking at her back - i didn't even see all that! i apologize for unintentionally taking minds in the wrong direction. i will have to be much more careful with such things. thanks for your input!
yeah she kinda is- i don't know about this page either. i thought about changing it... but i wanted to show him being put in an awkward situation, i wanted to show him have to fight with that. because that is something that all guys who are trying to live right, have to fight with. because it's everywhere. so on one hand he doesn't want to be in that situation, on the other, she can't seal up the wound without him, so he has to step up and fight to help someone out. and she, doesn't feel comfortable being in that situation either, and she doesn't like to ask for help...
and afterward, he is a little flushed... in the picture he's blushing, but he averted his eyes, he guarded his heart, and he can breathe a sigh of relief for passing the test. and honestly, i don't think he gives it much thought after that.
but for the guys reading it, if it's a stumbling block, i can make the dialogue bubble bigger... or i can rethink the layout of the page. because i don't want to make too light of something that is very deep and serious. if your eyes are bad, your whole body will be filled with darkness... and if the light within you is darkness... how great is that darkness! no one can serve two masters.
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it was a little questionable even when he was just looking at her back - i didn't even see all that! i apologize for unintentionally taking minds in the wrong direction. i will have to be much more careful with such things. thanks for your input!
and afterward, he is a little flushed... in the picture he's blushing, but he averted his eyes, he guarded his heart, and he can breathe a sigh of relief for passing the test. and honestly, i don't think he gives it much thought after that.
but for the guys reading it, if it's a stumbling block, i can make the dialogue bubble bigger... or i can rethink the layout of the page. because i don't want to make too light of something that is very deep and serious. if your eyes are bad, your whole body will be filled with darkness... and if the light within you is darkness... how great is that darkness! no one can serve two masters.