This story is so engrossing! I like the way you introduce new characters with the links, the way you write them there's no sense of confusion or disruption of the story. And it makes me want to get more books to find out about the cast:) Ha ha, it's like the video game 'Kingdom Hearts" or the movie 'Wreck It Ralph", 'cepting the guest characters aren't cameos, but important characters to the story. This is really well done Melchizedek!
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Thanks Brien
Page design is very well done, interesting and crystal clear.
Thanks Gerry. My plan was to get readers to check out everyone's characters.