Thanks Brien! I think removing the top claw is a good idea, too. I was trying to go for an effect that doesn't seem to be working. It's great to have a second opinion!
The textbox is pretty retro-cool. Since it does kind of look like a microphone-speaker you could also use it when someone else is radio-communicating with a character.
Removing the claw at top right could de-clutter the image a bit, but everything else looks top-notch.
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Thanks Brien! I think removing the top claw is a good idea, too. I was trying to go for an effect that doesn't seem to be working. It's great to have a second opinion!
The textbox is pretty retro-cool. Since it does kind of look like a microphone-speaker you could also use it when someone else is radio-communicating with a character.
Removing the claw at top right could de-clutter the image a bit, but everything else looks top-notch.
nice work