Hi Paul,
Thanks for sharing the samples.
Your work shows good clear story telling and flows nicely.
In the mode of offering feedback, I notice that we only see the main character in the plane. What if you could see some of the other passengers, to connect the visuals with his prayer. Just a thought.
Also, FYI, there are a couple of typo's, 'propose' in panel 1, looks like it should be 'purpose', and "Vearly" in that last panel, looks like it should be 'verily'. Blessings on your works. I look forward to seeing more in the future.
Hey micheal, i did all the colors in photoshop. How i got the looks to make it look like i used water color is a technique of blending the colors use the blending tool. I'm glad u approve of my work,"Always asking the Spirit to lead my hand.". Alot of the pictures were done two to three years ago. My art has matured in many way's and the cover to the preview has been fiinshed, pencils that is. Also all the art in the comic are just pencils converted to inks by scanning into the computer and playing with photoshop's tools.
A great sequence of panels. Very nice. But what did you use to color with? I can't tell. Photoshop or markers? If it was markers then you did a brilliant job! Cuz that wouldn't be easy.
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Thanks for sharing the samples.
Your work shows good clear story telling and flows nicely.
In the mode of offering feedback, I notice that we only see the main character in the plane. What if you could see some of the other passengers, to connect the visuals with his prayer. Just a thought.
Also, FYI, there are a couple of typo's, 'propose' in panel 1, looks like it should be 'purpose', and "Vearly" in that last panel, looks like it should be 'verily'. Blessings on your works. I look forward to seeing more in the future.