This is a really nice piece, stylistically. It looks like you had a pretty clear idea of what you wanted, and went for it. The girl has a lot of appeal, and the style looks fun.
That said, her walk at the beginning is really floaty and mechanical. I think it' because her feet don't plant and push, propelling her body forward, but instead they just slide back and forth under her, while her body moves itself. Also her front (right) arm seems to be exactly in sync with her opposite leg. It might be nicer if they were offset by a frame or two.
But again, nice stuff, seems like a fun concept. What's this for, anyway?
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That said, her walk at the beginning is really floaty and mechanical. I think it' because her feet don't plant and push, propelling her body forward, but instead they just slide back and forth under her, while her body moves itself. Also her front (right) arm seems to be exactly in sync with her opposite leg. It might be nicer if they were offset by a frame or two.
But again, nice stuff, seems like a fun concept. What's this for, anyway?
Is there more?