Hi All:
This one is early because (apparently) I'm improving at setting up, plotting, penciling, and inking pages. I'm thinking I either add more detail to the pages or keep moving up in productivity and crank out more than one page in a week. Thoughts.
Post one thing you like and one thing you dislike.
Comments
After some study I got that the 2nd panel is a top view of the Junk-car driver, but this small panel not necessary to the plot-flow. Angle of the Junk car in panel three makes it look like he's going to hit the Semi Truck.(?)
The sucker is a fun touch, as is the expression of the villain in the last panel. All your details successfully create a contrast and interesting dynamic between the two drivers. Well done
I like the page layout. I don't know what's happening in the second panel.