Limiting the page to less than 6 frames did give me more time to draw, still details were very intimidating. Inking I feel is improving, though I still see shaky lines and I'm doing all I can (or know how to) to make smooth and straight lines.
Post one thing you like and one thing you dislike.
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For simplicity, I labeled the panels so I could explain better:
I like the perspective work on the two pistols in the first two panels. And body language off the guy dropping the cigarette in panel 4 is really good.
For me the eye flows to panel 4 before panel 3. The eye instinctively wants to finish reading left-to-right before moving further down the page.