Pg 20 I had actually finished the week before last, but finally took a photo last night to post today, so that's progress I guess. Page 21 I finished this week.
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I like your flying figures on each page a lot, your poses are fluid and dynamic.
I am concerned about a lack of space for speech bubbles on some of the smaller frames but I'm sure you have that worked out already.
The explosion on page 1 is so dramatic that I think it should be at the bottom of a page; allow the reader apage-turning pause before picking up plot that appears to be continuing at the bottom of page 1.
Good job, Mr. Weckerly!
Page 1: big panel 3# looks awesome. there's a lot of action
One page two there's what looks like a rocket...but I couldn't quite tell if it was rocket or not.