Wow, powerful storytelling with a minimum of really placed lines and white space. Well done.
Al Nickerson > Brien SparlingFebruary 27, 2020 at 8:13am
Also, all of that white space in the panels is for all the needed lettering. Haven't gotten to that yet.
Al Nickerson > Brien SparlingFebruary 27, 2020 at 8:08am
Thanks, Brien. Yeah... I try not to be too graphic with my storytelling... even when addressing things that are graphic in nature. And there are ways around that. For example, with panel three, I could have depicted the actual act of Jigai instead of showing the result.
Brien Sparling > Al NickersonFebruary 27, 2020 at 8:17am
Exactly. Let the actual graphic action happen between two frames, in the viewers imagination.
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