Hi All:
Been in a funk lately, the new project is hitting snags and I have not been very consistent in working on it daily. I was planning on posting the whole completed project once done, but since I'm way behind I've decided to post the first short issue so I can move onto the next short issue.
I set it up to have the opening spread establish the waterfall city, the main character moving there as a kid and the city as it is once he grew up and became a cop. Odd numbered pages that follow are his memories of that first day and the even numbered pages are "life as usual" for him in adulthood.
List 3 things you like and 3 things you dislike.
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Hey Landon, Good to see more of your work.
This arc has lots of great camera-angles; your ability to fore-shorten bodies, cars and buildings with different perspectives just gets better and better. The flow of action is pretty clear, top to bottom; having the memories and present-day happen with different lighting would clarify the difference between the two even further.
In the first frame they appear to be entering waterfall city from the front; if they enter more from the top, then both the protagonist and readers will descend into the city as they scroll down the page.
Excellent imaginative touches, really engaging stuff.