Sorry to publish unfinished pieces, but since we are creators you can offer me help along the way which I do appreciate. Secondly, I like looking over the draft pieces of others and learning from their thoughts.
I really do welcome all thoughts and questions!
Chapter 3 (from my website abalonofcalifornia.com ) closes with Abalon, my young protagonist (smallest character in the crowd in the first pic ), being introduced to each of these vaqueros by name. I wanted to briefly introduce Abalon and my audience to the new characters personalities and key abilities ASAP before moving forward with them in the story. I decided to expand this to three pages to make the introductions a little more entertaining; also I killed off a key sub-character in chapt 3, and I wanted to explain a few of the connections between the victim and the lead vaquero named Uno Ojo.
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Looking great Brien.
Sorry to publish unfinished pieces, but since we are creators you can offer me help along the way which I do appreciate. Secondly, I like looking over the draft pieces of others and learning from their thoughts.
I really do welcome all thoughts and questions!
Chapter 3 (from my website abalonofcalifornia.com ) closes with Abalon, my young protagonist (smallest character in the crowd in the first pic ), being introduced to each of these vaqueros by name. I wanted to briefly introduce Abalon and my audience to the new characters personalities and key abilities ASAP before moving forward with them in the story. I decided to expand this to three pages to make the introductions a little more entertaining; also I killed off a key sub-character in chapt 3, and I wanted to explain a few of the connections between the victim and the lead vaquero named Uno Ojo.