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Would anyone be interested in reviewing my story?

Posted by Samuel Harris on November 17, 2009 at 12:56pm in STORYTELLING WRITING

Hey everyone, I'm a writer and I've written several chapters of a story about a Christian superhero called the Watchman. I'd like it to become a comic book eventually, but right now it's just in written format. If anyone would like to read it and critique it so I know if there's anything I should improve, please let me know. I want to make sure that my story makes sense, the characters are well-developed, that it's entertaining, that it brings glory to God, and if there's anything else that still needs work. Links to the story can be found on my page, and so can a few pictures I've done of the characters. Thanks, and I appreciate your help!God bless,Sam

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Martin Murtonen November 24, 2010 at 8:30pm

I was going to mention the same as Alec.
Calvary Comics November 24, 2010 at 1:00pm

After the decades' long success of Alan Moore's WATCHMEN, I think you'd have a conflict-of-interest lawsuit on your hands if a WATCHMAN comic ever came into DC's radar. Perhaps a few additional words in the title with "Watchman" would help to eliminate that problem.

Best regards,

Alec
Martin Murtonen November 23, 2010 at 9:49am

Would love to.

PM me if you want.
Robert Nobile November 22, 2010 at 7:07pm

Sure I am more than happy to. Lets see what you got? : )