Hey everyone, I wanted to post some pencil/ink scans with textboxes of a Christian webcomic I'm wanting to write called The Kamishibai Man. I wanted to ensure that the flow and story made sense - I wasn't too sure that the Kamishibai's singing made sense, or even if I liked it, so I wanted input. Essentially the comic is about a kamishibai man (a japanese story teller, of sorts), who goes around telling kids stories that are allegorically Christian. Anyway, any input would be appreciated; note that these are just rough sketches so I am not really looking for criticism of the art, so much as I am looking for criticism of the flow and story:
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