Hey everyone, my buddy Alex is doing a Christian series called REVELATORS and its some really, really good stuff.
I'm asking on his behalf for you to check out his website and please consider helping him raise funds to go to print. Currently he has 6 full color issues ready and 4 ready for release but no money.
Alex has poured his heart and soul into this book and he just needs a little help from friends/family to get it into stores. This is an AWESOME ministry he is doing and he definatley has earned some support. Please visit the link below to get more information!
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Mike - thanks a lot! I'll pass it along, Merry Christmas brother!
Okay, Conner, sorry about the delay. Had some family issues creep up and didn't have time until this morning to check the video out again. Here are the edits for the video, each with a time stamp to make them easier to look up.
00:23-That should read "reshaped the world's nations..." as it is a possessive. The only possessive that exists without an apostrophe 9As far as I know) is its, as in "the dragon removed its claws from my spleen once I said 'please'."
1:00-He might want to change this bit to "yet even with such vast change, Mankind had seen nothing to compare to what is to come." The original "was seen nothing in comparison of what is to come..." is awkward and grammatically incorrect.
2:37-He ought to add a word to the first sentence; "...soon after their mission begins..." because without the word begins he is implying that their mission is already over by the time the Antichrist hears about it, which would make for an awfully short comic!
Other than that, the text is fine, the art looks fantastic, and the project will receive a contribution from me as soon as I can toss it in there. I'm not sure when that will be but it will be before the deadline!
Hey Gerry, from my understanding he was going to send out all the perks once fundraising was complete. I think its around late January. I'll mention it to see if he can get it out earlier. Thanks for the help!!
Gerard Lee said:
Hi Conner! I was just wondering when the pdf.s for donations get emailed out. Really eager to read some of Revelators!
Be well, be blessed!
Gerry
cool, thanks Michael. I went back and caught a "was" where should have been "has"..
Conner said:
I think he was in a hurry when he did the video, and it could have been better but I didn't notice anything too obvious. Mike - pm me the mistakes so I can fwd them to Alex.
Gerard - its a worthy cause. Alex is a good guy with no money is the problem. Any amount you could donate would help.
Phillip - check out the vizionpress website mission statement. It should be able to help you out. Also, demographically I would assume its for ages 10-40? just from what I have read. The story goes so much deeper than the video shows. Alex only put scenes from a few issues, but last I heard he's working on issue 7 already and has written 42 in total.
I like the art and the video presentation very much. I'll try to scrape up a few dollars for a small donation and look at the books. It's great that Alex is making the books available as gifts for the smaller donations, I think many will want to check the book out to see if they agree with his story's vision of Christianity before donating more. But it looks really good from what I've seen!
well, brother sounds interesting. But I do agree with Mike, however, this project looks very promising. Now, what age groups is this going to be targeted at? Because it looks like its already for female and male readers alike. What is this projects mission statement? Some things to have ready for your meeting with investors. Let me know how I can help, find me here and send a message.
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