Here's the next 5 pages of my OG comic.
This batch didn't take as long as the others, trying to keep that streak going.
The big difference you may see is in page 18. I used a canson art board instead of the blue line pros. The canson boards are cheaper, but once I started drawing on it, I noticed they aren't the same grade as blue line. not as sturdy as the blue lines, they smudge easier on erasing, and the surface is rougher which dulled my lead faster so I had to sharpen more often. The upside though is they make a better transfer to digital media (jpgs), the lines are crisper on the jpg and the grey line were the two ends of the page (scanned one end at a time because my scanner isn't that big) is not as big as on the scans of the blue line.
Apart from that, I tried to get the story moving closer to the resolution and get down to the brass tax as quickly as possible. I'm hoping to wrap this story up before or at 30 pages.
Have fun and post feedback.
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Hey brien:
judging by the time stamps on my discussion posts, this 5 page batch took me a little over 2 months to complete.
I'll work on the word balloons, though I warn you, i'm not a good writer.
Thanks for the kudos, always helpful.
Brien Sparling said:
Pretty darn cool, Landon. All the usual kudos to you for changes in distance, POV and body position. You're really doing some magic with your characters in Zero-G!
How much time did this take?
Could you post a draft with word balloons inserted; that would give us more clues to the plots and insure that you've got room for everything the characters want to say.