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Feedback needed on developing story

Posted by Brien Sparling on January 17, 2020 at 4:00pm in STORYTELLING WRITING

Carl Tiessen put out an outline of a story he's working on 7/23/19; you can find the outline here:  http://www.christiancomicarts.com/forum/topics/looking-for-comic-collaborator-to-bring-dinosaur-themed-story-to?xg_source=activity   . I have been collaborating with him on character design and now are starting to storyboard for the eventual graphic novel. We would both like some feedback and suggestions on the story and storyboards, found here as attachments.3883455834?profile=originaland page 2...

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  • Truth Quest Productions January 18, 2020 at 9:15am
    As someone who is currently working on a storyboard myself for a project; I can say this is a good start. It describes the area and features without having too much detail. The environment is very unique, the tree house is creative, and the character's design is functional. The only thing I would give a suggestion for the future is to add other dynamic frames besides only rectangles. It doesn't have to be a comic to use other shapes. Using other slants and shapes give more life to the story. These frames can show action and other events. Overall, a great start and unique idea. Good work!
    • Brien Sparling > Truth Quest Productions January 18, 2020 at 6:20pm

      Good observations! Thank you.

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